Kia Ora John, I am Jason from Belfast School. I really like how you told the reader what ingredients you need, and how you make the fruit sticks. The fruit sticks really remind me of kebabs. Next time try add some pictures of how you make the fruit sticks. What's your favourite fruit?
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora John, I am Jason from Belfast School. I really like how you told the reader what ingredients you need, and how you make the fruit sticks. The fruit sticks really remind me of kebabs. Next time try add some pictures of how you make the fruit sticks. What's your favourite fruit?
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